i liked it really much, but i have two criticisms to tell, the first is to make the movement of the view much more slower please, and the other one is that the ending is really bad...
what is so bad about the end. It was finally something different then any other game. Same as what BIAS did. These people try to think outside the box. On the the fact of the sensitivity you can manage that on your own pc. I managed to make it a bit less sensitive. Just a tip :)
You should play it. It is an easy but very very creepy game. Pretty short as well. Incredible atmosphere to be honest. Can check it out on my YT channel if you want to. But I advise you to play it yourself :)
Oh I will. I just subbed to you. I upload horror games as well. I will watch yours but definitely will play it first. I love getting the scares and watching others play it after to see if im just a coward or to see if it was actually scary :)
it's not true, non everyone can manage on their pc the sensitivity, so it can be a problem, and about the final, the final is bland, it's just the girl killing you, you just close the game, you open it again and you get killed, that's it, andit's bland.
But in what way do you compare it this end? It is a small creator whom is trying to do his best to produce a game that we can enjoy. About the sensitivity it is indeed better that the creator makes it more enjoyable, but it is giving and taking. The game is short and free after all.
So if you find it boring to do it for yourself or to find a way to make it work, then don't criticize on it. Rather give feedback. Because criticism deflates creator and you don't help him with it but feedback inspires them and helps them to make them better. Don't get me wrong. You should definitely share your opinion.
man, what you said is no sense and it isn't an excuse, it is ridiculous, if a game is bad it is bad!
if you are a small creator, i understand it, but it doesn't mean that if you are a small creator i am forced to say that it is good, if the game is bad it is bad!
if the final doesn't work and it is bland, i have to say it because that's what the game is!
just stop being angy for a criticism that is right about your game, and try to improve your game developing making a better new game in future with my advices, that's better for you.
and no, every game, every thing has to be criticized, because criticisms helps creator to make them better.
if you can't understand it, that's not my problem, i am free to say every criticism i want to say.
First of, please do understand the difference between criticism and feedback. if you don't than do your research, because they are not the same at all. you are not helping the creator by saying it is a bad game or it is bland or it sucks. you don't' help them at all. if YOU don't understand that, then there is no reason to argue about because I won't get it through your thick skull.
I am not angry about criticism my friend. It is just the wrong way to help these creators. I have seen normal feedback about a game that is bad and it different then you bring it. If everything has to be criticized then also take yourself into consideration. I am giving you feedback about that.
Besides it is not even my game, it just don't like the way you said it. As you said it: I am free to say every "criticism" and so i am doing the same.
And this: 'and try to improve your game developing making a better new game in future with my advices, that's better for you' There is no advice at all, none at all.
As I said before. I appreciate your opinion. I do hope you know that. We are just discussing and arguing :)
and seriously? i have to look for a way to change the sensitivity of the mouse? doing that is boring, a game has to look good, and have a good sensitivity by it, and I don't have to be the one to fix your game errors like the sensibility.
Pretty awesome game you made there. Can't wait for future products and updates. What you did at the end was pretty cool. I kind of didn't want to quit the game. Thumbs up for you my man!
Great game, I liked the graphics and the gameplay. I think my first time I got both endings back to back because I kept playing and didn't quit. Second time I went through her door. I don't know if I missed an ending or not based on the screencaps here but regardless I had a good time. Thanks!
Now that's a spin I wasn't quite expecting! I'm sure many have said the same of what I'm about to say: I'M AN INSANELY HUGE FAN OF PT! I've played many varieties of fan-made inspired projects, and they're all wickedly awesome in their own right. I love your approach to the concept by sprinkling in some traditional ideas, but then mixing in your own! Even the very end was a twist!
Very nice :D Can't wait for the full game to come out :)
But I think you need to fix the sensitivity because it's too high XD or maybe you can add an option to customize the sensitivity And also I think you need to change the The. Sandman music because it's copyrighted XD
But the game is still good in my opinion :D Here is my gameplay in Malay Greetings from Malaysia! ヾ(￣▽￣)
I always love games that throw little hints and make players figure things out by themself. So I tried to do that here. The game still extremely unfinished tho lol
Hello, I played this game and I liked it, it had some neat moments, although I tried multiple times to run past the closing door but I couldn't, also it'd be really neat if there was something more to it if I don't "quit" the game and wait, over all cool little game, good work :)
Alright. To start off, good game, neat environment and visuals. Although, the entire concept of looping and P.T. style game is not my cup of tea. The functionality of the game heavily relies on gameplay, which your project delivers, but, there are some aspects, which made the game weaker. Like the beginning stage, the crawling and winning the "escape route", that's was a bit ghetto, but for the tone it changed fast towards the ending. Another big problem with the game is sound design, very weak and the copyrighted part needs to be removed, because it might be problematic for some. It's a personal preference, but just keep that in mind. Now, objectively, for the demo, the game is good. It needs improvements, maybe a little ambience and definitely tonal change - either go with a dark humor or creepy atmosphere, they don't always work together.
I did not mean to criticize the work you've done, it's really great, especially now, that I know it's your first game, definitely neat. I enjoyed it very much. It's just simple things you need to work on, sound design and tone, like, making it more scary or more funny. Good Luck!
With The Mouse it is impossible to play... too much sense that you can't change... if you solve you can also make a video that I'll post on youtube channel
Well, it's up to you haha. But seriously tho, this is just a small demo so I don't have a proper ending for it yet. But it still has an 'ending' if you can find it :)
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i liked it really much, but i have two criticisms to tell, the first is to make the movement of the view much more slower please, and the other one is that the ending is really bad...
what is so bad about the end. It was finally something different then any other game. Same as what BIAS did. These people try to think outside the box. On the the fact of the sensitivity you can manage that on your own pc. I managed to make it a bit less sensitive. Just a tip :)
I haven't played this one yet but I really liked what the dev did with BIAS.
You should play it. It is an easy but very very creepy game. Pretty short as well. Incredible atmosphere to be honest. Can check it out on my YT channel if you want to. But I advise you to play it yourself :)
Oh I will. I just subbed to you. I upload horror games as well. I will watch yours but definitely will play it first. I love getting the scares and watching others play it after to see if im just a coward or to see if it was actually scary :)
nobody is a coward. My brother is 35 and he is terrified of anything that has to do with horror games or movies xD.
These games are called terrifying horror games for a reason. If you watch some videos of mine you can leave a comment so I know it's you!
it's not true, non everyone can manage on their pc the sensitivity, so it can be a problem, and about the final, the final is bland, it's just the girl killing you, you just close the game, you open it again and you get killed, that's it, andit's bland.
But in what way do you compare it this end?
It is a small creator whom is trying to do his best to produce a game that we can enjoy. About the sensitivity it is indeed better that the creator makes it more enjoyable, but it is giving and taking. The game is short and free after all.
So if you find it boring to do it for yourself or to find a way to make it work, then don't criticize on it. Rather give feedback. Because criticism deflates creator and you don't help him with it but feedback inspires them and helps them to make them better. Don't get me wrong. You should definitely share your opinion.
man, what you said is no sense and it isn't an excuse, it is ridiculous, if a game is bad it is bad!
if you are a small creator, i understand it, but it doesn't mean that if you are a small creator i am forced to say that it is good, if the game is bad it is bad!
if the final doesn't work and it is bland, i have to say it because that's what the game is!
just stop being angy for a criticism that is right about your game, and try to improve your game developing making a better new game in future with my advices, that's better for you.
and no, every game, every thing has to be criticized, because criticisms helps creator to make them better.
if you can't understand it, that's not my problem, i am free to say every criticism i want to say.
criticisms are feedback
First of, please do understand the difference between criticism and feedback. if you don't than do your research, because they are not the same at all. you are not helping the creator by saying it is a bad game or it is bland or it sucks. you don't' help them at all. if YOU don't understand that, then there is no reason to argue about because I won't get it through your thick skull.
I am not angry about criticism my friend. It is just the wrong way to help these creators. I have seen normal feedback about a game that is bad and it different then you bring it. If everything has to be criticized then also take yourself into consideration. I am giving you feedback about that.
Besides it is not even my game, it just don't like the way you said it. As you said it: I am free to say every "criticism" and so i am doing the same.
And this: 'and try to improve your game developing making a better new game in future with my advices, that's better for you'
There is no advice at all, none at all.
As I said before. I appreciate your opinion. I do hope you know that. We are just discussing and arguing :)
it's not a so creepy final or epic final, it's just you getting killed by the girl.
and seriously? i have to look for a way to change the sensitivity of the mouse? doing that is boring, a game has to look good, and have a good sensitivity by it, and I don't have to be the one to fix your game errors like the sensibility.
also because some pc doesn't allow you to fix it.
Pretty awesome game you made there. Can't wait for future products and updates. What you did at the end was pretty cool. I kind of didn't want to quit the game. Thumbs up for you my man!
pt was going to be the new SILENT HILL game but then he left konamy
Actually enjoyed this. Second game of the video for the playthrough!
I loved this game from start to finish!!!
The end was very unexpected
Nice Game
Second Game Btw
I loved it thought it was going to be silly but turned out to actually be kinda scary keep up the good work
Since I deleted the original video I made on this game, I decided to pay it a revisit. Got to say, still holds up.
love it wow
nice game but wished it was a little longer
Great game, I liked the graphics and the gameplay. I think my first time I got both endings back to back because I kept playing and didn't quit. Second time I went through her door. I don't know if I missed an ending or not based on the screencaps here but regardless I had a good time. Thanks!
Creepy game with awesome graphics and atmosphere! Eager to play the full game!
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My Video，Thanks，a nice horror game
Thank you for playing :
Hi friend, nice horror with good graphics!
Thank you for playing :D
I reuploaded this, hopefully with far better edits. Still has a headphones warning lol
A very unique take on the P.T. demo I enjoyed it quite a lot thank you for all the work put into this!
I really liked this one because I knew it was doing a P.T thing but it did it in a unique way so... CUDOS DUDE!
Thank you for playing :D
Great Work!
What an insane trip this was lmao thanks!
Thank you for playing :D
Very cool with the quit game part.
Thank you for playing :D
A very unique take on the P.T. demo I enjoyed it quite a lot thank you for all the work put into this!
Well thank you for playing :D
tayable pleaser
LOL XD
Can't wait for the full game to come out :)
But I think you need to fix the sensitivity because it's too high XD or maybe you can add an option to customize the sensitivity
And also I think you need to change the The. Sandman music because it's copyrighted XD
But the game is still good in my opinion :D
Here is my gameplay in Malay
Greetings from Malaysia! ヾ(￣▽￣)
Thank you so much for playing :D
Nice Demo , although i wanted something more than 5 minutes max time. I really can't wait for the full game!!!
Thanks man! Hearing someone actually excited for my game means a lot :)
thanks
Nice game
Thank you so much for playing :D
Thank you so much for playing :D
Thank you so much for playing :D
Fun little game, really enjoyed diving into this one! Def worth the download guys.
Thank you so much for playing :D
Thank you so much for playing :D
Threw a few curveballs of its own in there, giving the game a unique feel. This was very enjoyable! Great work!
Thank you so much for playing :D
I thought that square on the wall looked a little suspect. I even got confetti for my efforts. Really enjoyed playing through it.
Thank you so much for playing :D
I always love games that throw little hints and make players figure things out by themself. So I tried to do that here. The game still extremely unfinished tho lol
Thank you for playing! :D
Hello, I played this game and I liked it, it had some neat moments, although I tried multiple times to run past the closing door but I couldn't, also it'd be really neat if there was something more to it if I don't "quit" the game and wait, over all cool little game, good work :)
Thank you so much for playing :D
Alright. To start off, good game, neat environment and visuals. Although, the entire concept of looping and P.T. style game is not my cup of tea. The functionality of the game heavily relies on gameplay, which your project delivers, but, there are some aspects, which made the game weaker. Like the beginning stage, the crawling and winning the "escape route", that's was a bit ghetto, but for the tone it changed fast towards the ending.
Another big problem with the game is sound design, very weak and the copyrighted part needs to be removed, because it might be problematic for some. It's a personal preference, but just keep that in mind.
Now, objectively, for the demo, the game is good. It needs improvements, maybe a little ambience and definitely tonal change - either go with a dark humor or creepy atmosphere, they don't always work together.
Thank you so much for the detailed feedback. This is my first game, and I still have a lot to learn. So your comment def helps me out a lot :D
I did not mean to criticize the work you've done, it's really great, especially now, that I know it's your first game, definitely neat. I enjoyed it very much. It's just simple things you need to work on, sound design and tone, like, making it more scary or more funny. Good Luck!
Really Really Good..Pretty Similar to P.T ,, T.P
With The Mouse it is impossible to play... too much sense that you can't change... if you solve you can also make a video that I'll post on youtube channel
Can you clarify that? Do you want to be able to change the controls? If that then I'll working on it.
Thanks for the feedback :)
I Am Making Video so I am Stuck In The Room What to do after i tells you to quit the game.
Well, it's up to you haha. But seriously tho, this is just a small demo so I don't have a proper ending for it yet. But it still has an 'ending' if you can find it :)
I Will Share The Footage On Youtube ...It was so Good A Real Horror
That's Why i Was Looking FOr an ending
Just watched your video!
Little hints:
- You can use the light switch in one of the levels
- You can actually run pass the door closing on your face.
- After quitting to the main menu, if you decide to stick around and Play again..